I...... You Poem by Afzal Shauq

I...... You

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I...
human
like you..

Body
feels
effects...
winter
summer
spring
and the fall.

I...
eat
breath
still...
me
you
different...

You...
within
silent
still
eyes
a mirror

I...
Burdened
feel
regard
longs
drawn
towards you
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Poem In Pashto By: Afzal Shauq
Translated in English By: Alley Boling
Book: 'TWIST OF FATES' Poem No.192/Page.253
Web Link: http: //khyberwatch.com/nandara/index.php?
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PDF files: http: //khyber.org/books/ashauq/index.shtml
Poet's weblog: www.tolafghan.com/members/afzalshauq
© Afzal Shauq

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Ashraful Musaddeq 06 June 2009

This is an amazing poem with wonderful form/style. Love is the core message. Love it,10+++

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Merna Ibrahim 25 May 2009

A great poem by a great poet....I like your explanation to the human beings and mentioning what the do(they eat and breathe....) and i like this stanza so much'Body feels, effects..winter, summer, spring and the fall....keep it up wish you the best..

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