Afzal Shauq
Somewhere in the world of dreams

'Acquired Label'

Rating: 4.7
Being I am..
a child of Adam
as on the day
I, intented to step out
from the door of my home
chasing out for
my global siblings;

the rigid beings of
my own birth town
suddenly started gossiping
I’m 'an atheist'.. full grown!

Poem By: Afzal shauq

edited By: Catrina Heart
Friday, October 23, 2009
Leah Ayliffe 21 November 2009
Great poem, powerful words!
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Sally Plumb Plumb 30 October 2009
I am an athiest, I think your poem is top draw.
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Rachel Butler 30 October 2009
'Alas.., the rigid beings of my own birth town' Rachel Ann Butler
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Sandhya S N 30 October 2009
Brilliant expression regards sandhya
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Ala Elouri 29 October 2009
Short, breif but I like it! . Nice poem and keep up your work. :) I Hope you will become famous in this website and people see your talent.
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thylane loubry 28 October 2009
i love the way you epress you feelings sir :)
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Seraza Uzuner 28 October 2009
Nice piece of work, I appreciate.
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Anju Addanki 28 October 2009
A well written and short meanigful one.
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Sahar Sahar 27 October 2009
I like this poem and it is wonderfully written.....when we step out of home, which is our paradise we think about some very important prospects, being a mature son of Adam you feel some responsibilities....
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Amita Lama 27 October 2009
short and nice one.... keep it up
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