Iam A Women Poem by zandile zoya

Iam A Women

Rating: 3.8


who i am to be doubting
waking up every morning
not feeling like talking or walking
not in the mood of smiling
while people are busy loughing

who am i to be treated like a fool
as if am a useless tool to this world
why make me cry, when you can make smile
why watch my tears, when you can wash away fears
why cause pain, when you can bring me joy

who i am...?
i am a women
i am the light of this world
the one reason that is world can not do without
iam the hope...
the future
i mean am the mother of this nation

I AM A WOMEN
i need active minds to drive this world around
i am a women
i feel the pain but i naver cry
because i know this world with out me will never go round

I AM A WOMEN
am fregile
i need love
care
respect
most of all, i need to be treated like a queen
because i derseve better....

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Hazel Durham 11 July 2013

A powerful and compelling write about all the great attributes women have in abundance! !

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Ernest Makuakua 05 December 2015

okay queen Zandi well do. thats a beautiful piece love it for you are a woman indeed

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Heather Wilkins 14 August 2013

a good write for the women of this world. everyone has their needs.

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Sekharan Pookkat 08 August 2013

great thinking- I like it very much and appreciate you for sharing your poem

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Ckim Mbasa 24 July 2013

Great write but please arrange your stanzas in order to give it a flow, spice them with ironies and improve the grammar.

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Siyabonga A Nxumalo 11 July 2013

Great tribute to all women in the world, but check the grammar dear. Thanks for sharing. Siya_! !

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