Iceberg Poem by Tara Crown

Iceberg

Rating: 4.2


Sometimes I look at my life
And see Im outside looking in
Hovering above that bubble
In observation of my own sins.

Like a balloon on a string
Longing to float away so free
Or perhaps a blooming flower
Rejecting the stem to unfetter me.

If I had arms of any strength
I'd slice away those binding roots
With the knife of my own power
A clean cut, a clean wound.

But now I stand here knowing
That such threads will never break and
I flick my cigarette too hard, losing the tip
Of my iceberg
That's just the tip
Of my iceberg.

Wednesday, March 15, 2006
Topic(s) of this poem: longing
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Chuck Audette 16 March 2006

The anger and energy in this are the iceberg. Thanks for showing us the tip. The meter perhaps stumbled a little, but what iceberg is a perfect icecube? Wonderful. -chuck

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Linda Hepner 16 March 2006

Marvellous image to end with, Tara! === Linda

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Gina Onyemaechi 15 March 2006

And what a clever running-on image to crown all that imagery. Nice reading you again, Tara. Warmly, Gina.

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Duncan Wyllie 15 March 2006

What power contained.Really captivating and good use of metaphor in this one.Love Duncan

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Declan McHenry 15 March 2006

An intriguing introspection Tara. A well captured metaphor.

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