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...Icious

Rating: 4.5

Clinging to the vine
Ripening in the sun
Breathing unconsciously
Life has just begun

Reaching maturity
With natural ease
Abounding with sweetness
Bruised by a continuous squeeze

Releasing calming juices
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Marina Gasbey 20 July 2010

I really liked it, and yes, it was Delicious! It made me think of a kiwi, then an apple, no, a peach! Either way it played upon my senses, and now all I can think about is sweet succulent fruit.... Well I'm going to go make myself some fruit for breakfast now, thankyou! ..... Marina Gasbey.....

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Mark Nwagwu 04 November 2009

This is...iciously...icious! but which..icious will I pick? so many...icious words are not so nice - like malicious, pernicious, suspicious, fictitious - only delicious comes close to my feelings - delicious words, but not quite. Magnificent is more like it, Theresa yes, magnificent. Mark

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Nikunj Sharma 10 August 2009

stirring and stimulating work........well penned. Like it v much

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