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A Hush Remains

Rating: 4.2

The gray cloudless sky is strangely silent
As my skeletal arms reach toward heaven
Within my frame of time thoughts are absent
Suddenly, from nowhere there is an ascension

Hundreds of black birds flying synchronized...
So thick that there is barely an inch between
In unison… their aerobatics seem improvised;
Unanimously landing on my crown to convene

Conflicting chatter creates an odd serenade
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Bharati Nayak 23 October 2016

A hush remains as flapping wings take flight Visual traces are now distant from this old oak Binding roots tie tomorrows to a weary plight As the silver moon bestows its glowing cloak - - - - - - - - -An impressive write, thanks for sharing.Congratulations for Poem of the Day.

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Jayatissa K. Liyanage 23 October 2016

Amazing nature's events, how wonderful they are to watch! Grey cloudless sky all of a suddenly turning to hive of activities, crowd of wild birds with a leadership flying in synchrony, conflicting chatter on perch they are observing dad silence while on flight, silver moon bestowing its glowing cloak and numerous other things. Thanks for the Beautifully painted poetic picture. Congrats for bring the member's PoD. X

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Kim Barney 23 October 2016

A fascinating poem, Theresa! Congrats for having it selected as poem of the day!

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Beautifully done Theresa.Congratulations for being selected as member of the day Col Muhammad Khalid Khan

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Bisy Untan 23 October 2016

Visual picture of these birds are very beautiful! Thanks for sharing.

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Ratnakar Mandlik 23 October 2016

Heartiest Congratulations on the member poem of the Day.

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Bernard F. Asuncion 23 October 2016

what a beautiful illustration of words! ! .. Congrats for being selected....

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Tom Billsborough 23 October 2016

The grouping of birds is fascinating. Love blackbirds. Good poem.

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Mizzy ........ 23 October 2016

Beautifully written with great imagery.......Congrats!

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Unnikrishnan E S 23 October 2016

Hi Ms Moore, Congrats on being selected as the poet of the day. This beautiful poem on positive energy is a nice selection. Congrats to ph.

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