Liza Sud

Ideal Couple - Poem by Liza Sud

They look like sister and brother,
They laugh in the same way.
They may become wife and husband,
Like 2 sides of 1 face.

Their gestures have much in common,
Blue jackets at sofa grey.
Everyone is glad who saw them
Treats life as a game to play.

If I ever asked Lord Jesus
To show an ideal pair –
I even would not believe it,
That people could be the same.

Они - как брат и сестра,
одинаково любят смеяться.
Природные - муж и жена,
лица одного - две части.

У них похожие жесты.
диван, свитера голубые,
все рады, кто их ни встретит,
и жизнь для них - словно игры.

И если б я Бога просила -
показать идеальную пару -
не верила бы до сих пор,
что может быть так прекрасно!

Topic(s) of this poem: ideals

Comments about Ideal Couple by Liza Sud

  • Rini Jerry (8/24/2017 7:42:00 AM)

    Two sides of same face.. Wow an perfect ideal couple (Report) Reply

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  • Kumarmani Mahakul (11/16/2015 3:18:00 AM)

    Gorgeous expression. Beautiful and amusing one. Wisely shared really. Thank u dear Liza.....10 (Report) Reply

  • Daniel Brick (11/14/2015 7:59:00 AM)

    LIKE TWO SIDES OF ONE FACE is a marvelous image of this Ideal Couple. To achieve this quality of ONENESS is truly blessed, it demands the highest sense of caring for another human being and an unselfishness that transcends ordinary life. But at the end of your poem I knew what state the Ideal Couple had achieved - it is Happiness. (Report) Reply

  • Alice Perfect (11/13/2015 8:33:00 PM)

    Oneness exists
    it comes after
    complete forgiveness
    when the other
    can do no wrong
    it is real and rare on earth
    jesus did live that

    a wonderful write
    that gets my heart and mind gonig,
    nothing beats that

    thank YOU
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  • Jayatissa K. Liyanage (11/13/2015 9:34:00 AM)

    Is it a dream of Liza? or a real life event of some value? What ever, it's a nice write of a poetic touch. Enjoyed. (Report) Reply

  • Pijush Biswas (11/13/2015 5:13:00 AM)

    very good poem

    like it

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Poem Submitted: Friday, November 13, 2015

Poem Edited: Friday, December 4, 2015

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