Tuesday, August 21, 2018

Iets Mis.... Comments

Rating: 5.0

Er ging iets mis met mij
waardoor ik de wereld heb verloren
God heeft mij uitverkoren via mijn lieve moeder
om Zijn boodschap in de wereld te bekoren
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Sylvia Frances Chan
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Dr Dillip K Swain 21 August 2018

Typos: Full marks (10)

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Dr Dillip K Swain 21 August 2018

I am unable to make out the script. However, what I grasp from the notes, 'I always write with ONE L, but many in the world write that word with 2 LL's.' it's a beautiful poem my friend! (100

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Sylvia Frances Chan 22 August 2018

Please, read my poems in the English language only, thank you! Anyhow, I thank you for the efforts done, Dillip poet friend. GBU always in Abundance. Thank you for the 100. LOL...and for the full marks..

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Sylvia Frances Chan 22 August 2018

It's about the word Traveler. I always write that word with one L. Thank you for your attentive read.

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Sylvia Frances Chan 22 August 2018

You have to read the English version of the poem MISSING SOMETHING, Thank you!

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Sylvia Frances Chan 22 August 2018

The poem in the English language is MISSING SOMETHING and that is not about the one or two LL's. Then you will understand the text of the poem. A poem to be pondered upon, Dillip. Thank you

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