If I Poem by Susheela Alexiose

If I

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If I fall in love with you
I got a special package for you
You will be pampered day and night
Every minute thing of yours
Will be taken care of
I will love you with all madness
Shower you with gifts that you could only dream of
Will make you the Prince of my life

But dear, there's also a hidden clause
If I find you are not true
Within a moment's time
The package will be withdrawn
You will be thrown out of my life
As if you never existed on this earth
So honey, decide you want my love or not
Choice is entirely yours

Saturday, October 27, 2018
Topic(s) of this poem: love
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Dr Antony Theodore 03 November 2018

I will love you with all madness Shower you with gifts that you could only dream of Will make you the Prince of my life....the choice is yours. a fine poem...... love, its conditions.....togetherness, faithfulness till death and beyond. fine poem. tony

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Solomon Senxer 02 November 2018

hahahah! Just wondering whether you will agree with the lines I wrote on my poem The Lovelorn Loving someone does not mean you get to marry her, Loving someone does not mean you have to marry her Certainly, I agree with your poem, btw!

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Sekharan Pookkat 29 October 2018

If love is conditional it became possessiveness And wait for the sensational unconditional love with madness- depicted love with all its strength - read my poems too add my 10 plus

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