If I Told You I Love You-07 Poem by Selena Star

If I Told You I Love You-07

Rating: 5.0


If i told you 'I Love You'
What would you do?
If i stopped you in your tracks
Would you walk on thru?

You keep doing this to me
Over and over again
Will you take me back?
Or is this truely the end?

Baby, im telling you
I love you so much
I miss the taste of your lips
And that soft gentle touch

I long for you, i live for you
And i'll die for you too
So when are you going to take me back,
As your one and only boo?

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Lawrence S. Pertillar 11 October 2007

I like the simplistic directness of this. Yes, it is a little 'dramatic'. However, when love 'hits' someone, there's a bit of drama involved. Nice.

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