If Laughter Can Be Canned Poem by Aniruddha Pathak

If Laughter Can Be Canned

Rating: 5.0


For long been man amusing women,
Why, women seem to laugh more than men.
As old as mating game,
A hard job all the same;
Wonder if men can a laughter can.
For poets that be men,
Hard to muse, muse of pen,
Harder still if that be lady dame!
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Tongue-in-cheek |08.12.15 |

Wednesday, May 22, 2019
Topic(s) of this poem: romance,laughter,humour
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
When hard to muse, Muse can't be mused, and humour has exhausted, canned humour may be of help.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM

The title of this wonderful poem drew me to read the whole write. Very captivating and clever title. The rest of the work is amazingly humorous and entertaining as well. Excellently penned.

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Aniruddha Pathak 25 May 2019

It helps if the pen of the poet has some humour, yet a lot depends on the reader poet, if there is humorous bone (not the one in the arm, which is spelled differently) . Thank you.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 23 May 2019

Amusing expression dear sir. Very interesting to read. Thanks for sharing.

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Aniruddha Pathak 23 May 2019

Welcome to my poems after some gap. Thanks for the feedback.

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Dr Dillip K Swain 22 May 2019

It is said, 'laughter is the best medicine'....This humorous write has all ingredients to satisfy the saying! Well penned sir...10

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Aniruddha Pathak 23 May 2019

Thank you indeed, Dr Swain, for reading this ditty and rating it so well. It is when the humour is not hailed, one feels bad.

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Godhra - Gujarat
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