Does anyone feel like they’re completely bad
Can’t take back what you’ve said, can’t take back what you’ve done
When it feels like you’re tripping on your own two feet
All dried up and burnt from the sun
Been so long since I’ve reconciled thoughts in my head
And my actions that leave myself cautioning others
How I might make the innocent weep on the ground
Just out there to kill our own brothers
Widening gaps between love like the space in my heart
Won’t be filled, can’t be filled, by any ordinary means
If I talk to myself, all alone, in the dark
Look away, I am not what I seem
Does anyone feel this, like no good can be left
In a cold severed face from the ones all around them
Does anyone hate the thing that they’ve become
In my head, I remain the only one.
I really love this. It completely describes my feelings lately.
If life can rewind back to where you wanted to, Then life will not have regrets, It hits my feelings, of whom I changed to.. After all the time we lived, Everythin changes, the opposite way of what you don't want it to and what you want it to.. Good work =]
Your right. This does relate to what I feel. I can really connect to it, it has true meaning. Nice work.
i like this one cause it makes you question who you have become.
I really like your poems. This one in particular, i feel really hits home. Your good so keep writing.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
i absolutely love this poem of yours...i too hate the thing i have become, and there is no way i can get back...great poem.