If Soul A Circle Were Poem by Aniruddha Pathak

If Soul A Circle Were

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If soul a circle were
Whose fringes lie nowhere
And centre somewhere in us,
If death moves this centre
From this body to another,
From change of place, of breath,
Whatso given one's faith,
It's change but of locus.

Man's not afraid of death,
Afraid he's of locus.
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Musings |27.12.18 |

Thursday, March 7, 2019
Topic(s) of this poem: change,death
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
It is not death man is afraid of, but often it is change.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Edward Kofi Louis 09 March 2019

From this body to another! ! ! Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Aniruddha Pathak 09 March 2019

Yes, all souls part of an infinite family of circles with moving centres, thank you Edward Louis..

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Kumarmani Mahakul 09 March 2019

Soul travels from one body to another and soul is eternal. Life's journey continues. This poem is very brilliantly penned...10

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Aniruddha Pathak 09 March 2019

Yes, soul an infinite circle that only changes its centre, thank you Kumarnani Mahakul.

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Mj Lemon 08 March 2019

Amazing insight, Aniruddha. For some, change, almost any change, is a form of death. This verse goes to myfavourites.

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Aniruddha Pathak 08 March 2019

Good to know someone thinks alike, thank you Mj Lemon.

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Godhra - Gujarat
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