Kelly Kurt

Gold Star - 193,815 Points (1/14/1958 / Cedar Rapids Iowa)

If Then - Poem by Kelly Kurt

If then the stars should fall
Who would speak your name?
If then the universe should collapse
Who would hold your hand?
If then time should end
Who would remember your smile?
If then oblivion
Who?
I

Topic(s) of this poem: eternity, hope, life, love, memory, nature, time


Comments about If Then by Kelly Kurt

  • Wes Vogler (10/30/2015 6:15:00 PM)


    Not a poem (cause it doesn't rhyme) but I just about had tears in my eyes, you sneaky rascal. Gonna have to read some more of your stuff (undisciplined as it is.. grrr!) (I am 85 and gettin old isn't for sissies.) I found out about two years ago that writing poetry is fun. Maybe I should have started earlier. ta Wes (Report) Reply

    Kelly Kurt Kelly Kurt (10/30/2015 10:01:00 PM)

    Thank you, Wes. Writing is the one area in my life where I abandon discipline and write what I want to, without convention or rules. To me, poetry can be a sentence or a thousand paragraphs. It can rhyme or not. It can have meter or be random, as long as it is human. I'm not quite 60 yet but I agree, growing old aint for sissies

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  • Charity Nduhiu (9/4/2015 12:18:00 AM)


    Let us always be ready if anything happens. Nice thought (Report) Reply

    Kelly Kurt Kelly Kurt (9/4/2015 11:00:00 AM)

    ~~*Thanks, Charity

  • Ana Diaz (5/11/2015 6:58:00 PM)


    I really like the rhythm of this poem...so meaningful (Report) Reply

    Kelly Kurt Kelly Kurt (5/11/2015 7:28:00 PM)

    Thank you, Ana. I appreciate your kind words

  • Bharati Nayak (4/23/2015 9:10:00 AM)


    If then the star should fall
    Who would speak your name
    If then the universe should collapse
    Who would hold your hand- - - - - - - Beautifully crafted the poem says so many things in so few words!
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    Kelly Kurt Kelly Kurt (4/23/2015 11:39:00 AM)

    Thank you, Bharati. Love is eternal

  • Simone Inez Harriman (4/1/2015 3:10:00 AM)


    Beautiful poem Kelly. Thank you :) (Report) Reply

    Kelly Kurt Kelly Kurt (4/1/2015 1:11:00 PM)

    Thank you Simone. I think I am a poor romantic but I am a loyal, dedicated eternal friend'
    Peace

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Poem Submitted: Tuesday, March 24, 2015

Poem Edited: Monday, April 20, 2015


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