Double Intrusion Poem by Ima Ryma

Double Intrusion

Rating: 4.7


A grain of sand gets stuck in me,
Causing me irritation - damn!
And so does respond my body
To give some relief to this clam.
I use some of the same stuff that
Is used in making of my shell.
This stuff flows to where the sand's at,
And coats over the sand real well.
Layer after layer of stuff
Goes 'round the sand and forms a ball.
As the time has gone by enough,
I feel much better after all.

But humans make my life awhirl,
Grabbing that thing they call a pearl.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Dr Dillip K Swain 17 February 2022

As the time has gone by enough, I feel much better after all....to this I would juxtapose the penultimate line without any space!

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 17 February 2022

A wonderful well crafted poem. Congratulations! !

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Ruta Mohapatra 17 February 2022

Imaginative! Congratulations!

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Nabakishore Dash 17 February 2022

Very nicely written revered poet.

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MAHTAB BANGALEE 17 February 2022

only human is wonderful creation!

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