Im Living My Life Poem by Daniel Chapman

Im Living My Life

Rating: 4.5


Part of my life is ink and iron,
tattoos etched like chapters into skin,
lessons learned behind walls and rules—
where loose mouths draw the line
between wisdom and foolishness.

Part of my life smells like gunpowder,
bullets, blood, sweat, and tears—
a reality I didn't visit,
but survived for years.

Part of my life still dreams—
quiet wishes, stubborn hope,
moments where happiness exists
without the weight of the world pressing close.

Part of my life knows lies by name,
has shaken hands with deceit,
watched greed, envy, and hate
get dressed up as leadership
and called 'great.'

Part of my life is all of it combined—
because every day I witness sorrow
and love shows up late, if at all.

Part of my life carries too much love to give,
yet I feel death breathing closer
with every risk I live.

My life isn't clean enough to be right
or broken enough to be wrong.
I ask for no sympathy—
this is my truth,
and I'm still standing,
still living my life.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Dorothy- A. Holmes 14 July 2007

I love this poem! I love the truth spilling from all of it! 10 from me. Dorothy

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DaLovely One 03 April 2007

I'm really enjoying your poems. This is really interesting the way it's worded..

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Charley60 K 29 December 2006

Very interesting write.....well said..

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Kelly Hanson 08 December 2006

wonderful - your best yet! there are still a couple of sticky spots though. make it shine, daniel. you have a real talent

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