Immortality Poem by catty Alonzo

Immortality

Rating: 5.0


You have come through a dream though
barely can not be touch and be unfolding
with complete compassion.

Your stray is timeless when you flew to
the sky and rested your feet to the
ground where a love profoundly waits
for your home coming.

You rested your eyes to the one you
cried to run your fingers with, cried to
let your disdains be told to but your
immortality hinders your longing that
you were only left to laid eyes on that
sleeping image who you meekly
watched eyed with.

An open eye meets your gaze and
owes of vagueness stunned your
chilling bones when you heard a
voice as soft as a whisper

“I know you will come”

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Frank James Ryan Jr...fjr 12 November 2006

A poignant, powerful, work, Cat...Quite well constructed, including commendable imagework and smooth fluxion throughout...A fine Penning, indeed................. ''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''{ F j R }

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