Sanjukta Nag

Gold Star - 21,168 Points (05-07-1992 / India)

Immortality - Poem by Sanjukta Nag

If I engrave your name
On the stony wall of grayish ancient cave
Darkness will wrap those dearest letters
With the cape of nihility…

If I inscribe your name
On the slushy sand of blanched sea shore
Waves will envelop those dearest letters
With the veil of anonymity…

But, if I write your name
In the midst of my crimson love poem
Fondness will embrace those dearest letters
With the cloak of immortality…

Topic(s) of this poem: love


Comments about Immortality by Sanjukta Nag

  • David Wood (9/12/2015 5:26:00 AM)


    Lovely poetry. I think all poems are immortal...... Good ink (Report) Reply

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  • (9/12/2015 5:21:00 AM)


    Melodious poetry..........delight to read. (Report) Reply

  • Rajnish Manga (9/12/2015 4:32:00 AM)


    Thanks for such an amazing poem. Three stanzas unfold three different denouements and a philosophy. The beauty of the poem also lies in the melody and sweetness of its words. Thanks. (Report) Reply

  • Mohammed Asim Nehal (9/12/2015 4:14:00 AM)


    Awesome poetry. Left me Speechlessssssssssss with your words....
    But, if I write your name
    In the midst of my crimson love poems
    Fondness will embrace those dearest letters
    With the cloak of immortality… 100**********
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Poem Submitted: Saturday, September 12, 2015

Poem Edited: Saturday, September 12, 2015


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