Immutable Desire Poem by Eila Mahima Jaipaul

Immutable Desire

Rating: 5.0


lying beneath
feeling your dust of skin
there's presented
in cobalt reflection
a sense of time
and its seamless texture.
rampant loss in it echoes
as all becomes silenced
by heartbeats

Wednesday, April 5, 2006
Topic(s) of this poem: loss
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Frank James Ryan Jr...fjr 23 August 2006

Eila...HAVEN'T SEEN YOU ON LINE LATELY...HOPE ALL IS WELL WITH YOU THIS IS A GORGEOUS PIECE OF SUCCINCT MASTERY...THE IMAGERY TELLS ALL & YOU HAVE ACCOMPLISHED A MOST MERITWORTHY SLICE OF VERSE HERE....''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''FJR

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