29 June Poem by Eila Mahima Jaipaul

29 June

Rating: 4.9


leaf skeletons
stems hollow
tiny veins, rigid
support air
where once lay
fragrant memory

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Nimal Dunuhinga 06 August 2006

Nothing is certain poem says.................Exceptional! Eila.

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Frank James Ryan Jr...fjr 06 August 2006

Fourteen words that profoundly images, and depicts the Efflorescent Death... Fine Penning, Eila''''''''''''''''''fjr

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Such palpable tangible poetic images

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Souren Mondal 10 November 2015

Wow! This is really incredible...

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Molaire Jules 29 June 2007

That is also my mom's birthday. ''Great write! ''

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***** ********* 08 August 2006

This sounds like a great loss Eila, expressed in a beautifully formed poem. I don't know what happened on that date but I feel your pain. Tai

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Duncan Wyllie 08 August 2006

So much said in so few words, no failed poet lives here! ! ! Love duncan X

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