Friday, January 13, 2006

An Intimidated Poet

Rating: 4.1
I lost my pen, love
it ran out of ink.
all I have left
is a pencil with
a chewed off
and the task
of writing
about you
with no mistakes.
Eila Mahima Jaipaul
Kim Barney 10 November 2015
Lovely! No longer than it needed to be. Every word counts. Great job!
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Kay Staley 10 November 2015
how charming and lovely. One of the best non rhyming poems I have read in awhile. So simple and sweet.
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Souren Mondal 10 November 2015
A short yet brilliant poem.. The use of the pencil with 'chewed' eraser is beautiful...
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Rahman Henry 10 November 2015
Lovely poem, simple but a beauty that is capable to touch a reader
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M Asim Nehal 10 November 2015
Simple and powerful poem....on Life, on relationship and on everything it fits perfectly.
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Kenneth Maswabi 10 November 2015
Solid words on a short leash. This poem is full of confidence. I love it. Thank you.
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Joe Breunig 06 August 2006
An enjoyable poem; loved how the ending fit the poem's title.
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Indiscreet Episode 18 January 2006
I really like this one. Finding the right words does often feel impossible. How to capture somebody that means so much on paper?
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Ernestine Northover 13 January 2006
Oooohhhhh! that's a dodgy situation there Eila, I think breadcrumbs are supposed to work quite well as an eraser, though I've never tried it. Clever write indeed. Love Ernestine XXX
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Alice Vedral Rivera 13 January 2006
volumes in brevity avr
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