Imperfection Poem by Rini Shibu

Imperfection

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A bouquet of flowers
fills you with joy
But won't last more than a day
How much ever you stitch
and add the length
The perfection will be
less than imperfection
And so the thirst for true love
Is endless and
Wordly pleasures can't fulfill

Tuesday, February 20, 2018
Topic(s) of this poem: love
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Dr Antony Theodore 04 March 2018

so the thirst for true love Is endless and Wordly pleasures can't fulfill.... very fine comparison dear Rini and a sublime realization. true love........ thank you dear Rini.. tony

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Rini Shibu 08 March 2018

Thanks Dr.Tony..! ! Rini

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Edward Kofi Louis 28 February 2018

The thirst for true love! Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Rini. 01 March 2018

Thanks Kofi Louis..! !

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Seamus O Brian 21 February 2018

There is deep truth here, along with wisdom that ought to be heeded. My favorite line is The perfection will be less than imperfection. It is intriguing to contemplate the dimensions of that thought. Another well crafted and sage perspective on love and relationships. :)

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Rini Shibu 21 February 2018

Thanks Seamus for your comment..! ! Rini

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White Tiger 21 February 2018

I agree totally with this write. Love comes from the soul and can only be felt deep inside ourselves Very interesting write. Thanks for sharing Rini.

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Rini Shibu 21 February 2018

Thanks charlie..Glad to read your comment

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Lamar Cole 20 February 2018

This is a very thought invoking poem about imperfection.

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Rini Shibu 21 February 2018

Thanks Lamar...true love is above all

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