Lawrence S. Pertillar

Gold Star - 48,706 Points (February/'47 / Connecticut, USA)

Improvements - Poem by Lawrence S. Pertillar

Improvements known needed,
And wished to realized...
To receive and get without sacrifice,
Can not be achieved to leave to debate.
Or one wanting to see improvements made,
But awaiting to hear opinions from others...
If they would okay and approve,
Those improvements made...
Whenever they get to be done.

'Suppose I choose to improve,
And no one likes what it is I do? '

~Suppose I should change the topic,
And you dislike what it is I pick? ~

'I don't have to listen.
And I can get up to leave.
If that is what I wish.'


'Where are you going? '

~To prove to myself,
I can get a better conversation somewhere else.~

Topic(s) of this poem: life

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Poem Submitted: Monday, March 2, 2015

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