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In And Out

Rating: 3.0

Blink in and out of time.
No grip on reality.
What day is it if not today?
Not a dream do I recall.
Am I awake?
Short of breath never the less.
Could I be asleep?
Blink in and out of time.
Never knowing if I remain awake or at rest.

Sunday, May 24, 2015
Topic(s) of this poem: crazy
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
Wrote it on request for devin and his girlfriend.
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Kay Staley 14 September 2015

To me this poem speaks of the subconscious...and hints at Descartes and his saying Cogito Ergo Sum/I think therefore I am. The odd subconscious question of am I really alive, or is my non-being alive enough to imagine myself? Nice provoking thoughts flow from this poem, that can be as deep as the reader allows them to be.

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Noreen Carden 25 May 2015

This poem seems to be about a busy life when we are trying to fit so much into each day I enjoyed reading this. Well done Gary terrific work

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Noreen Carden 25 May 2015

This poem seems to me to be a comment on a very busy life and how we get caught up in

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