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I Love You.

Rating: 4.8

She held me close and tight, 'I love you, ' is what she said.
She held me close and tight, 'Look at me, ' is what she said as tears ran down her face.
I moved her to look into her eyes, 'I love you too.'
I moved her some more to wipe her tears, 'Don't cry.'
And as she begged me and fought with me I said 'Don't cry, pray.'
And in went the final piece to her tomb, and a picture to forever remember her 'Love' for me.

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Kaila George 30 March 2014

You made me cry...I thought at first it was a moment you sharing because you were happy but then the last line two lines tells the sad you feel at losing her...beautiful written thanks for sharing

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Bhavna Singh 18 January 2014

lots of feeling.... its awsm poetry

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Ashley Kolakowski 17 December 2013

I feel the pain and meaning behind this. It is a very touching, sad poem. I love it :)

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Noreen Carden 27 November 2013

An interesting poem the line about in went the final piece to her tomb is a bit frightening and i cant help but wonder what your thoughts were when you wrote it. Well done

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Chinedu Dike 12 March 2018

Fine and lofty verse written in persuasive expressions with conviction. Well conceived and nicely brought forth. Thanks for sharing Gary.

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Edward Kofi Louis 25 December 2015

Love is the key about life! Loving her is all that you need. Nice work.

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Hazel Durham 08 August 2015

A deeply touching write with a love that is beauty written with a great heart!

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* Sunprincess * 28 May 2015

.....very nice...with lots of emotion ?

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Khairul Ahsan 25 May 2014

I wonder if this poem is written about your mother's love. About whoever or whatever it may be, the poem is touchy! The last two lines are really so! Best wishes, and happy writing!

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