~ In Between Change ~ [18 Words Poetry]
Ms. Nivedita
UK
Girlfriend
Changing
Dress
Before
Boyfriend.
She
Asked
Glowingly,
‘In
Which
One
Looked
Best? '
Boyfriend
Quipped,
‘In
Between
Change'
This is very clever, although I had to read it twice to get the joke......
Well, thats true form of poetry for me.. You have left the task for the reader to decide Whether to laugh at it! Or, to sqeeze the eyebrows and think it out! I loved it..
Laughter is the best 'Poetic Medicine' Here poet intelligently served that thro' cerebrate way and it is 'rib-tickling' Great reading Thanks for sharing 10+
Very intelligently and sophisticatedly crafted JOKE sensuality without vulgar Cheers
Finest/filtered shade of enjoyable JOKE... poetically well presented...thanks for sharing
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Hahahaha great jest in poetic format kudos tenner