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~ If Love Not Given ~

Rating: 4.9
Ms. Nivedita

Why fire of tune
Ignite in my soul?

Why lulu love
Deluge you in my soul?

Why glittery starry garland
Decor you on my neck?

Why touch-travel
O’er my soul
Like rill breeze?

Why vermillion red
Nascent Sun God
Gander at me from east?

Why sway me
By bedecking smile
Like refulgent sky?

Why touch me
Like blooming buds
Smiling at me?

How I’ll embosom
Encrypt bind moor
Your vast euphony
Riches rapture rhapsodic
In my wee bosom
If love not given?

Your entire floral love décor
How I’ll keep wreath
If love not
Given in my soul?

Why keep me
Pale placid turbid
Instead florid limpid
If love not
Given in my soul
In towering
Pellucid teemingness?

If love not given…?


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Sayeed Abubakar 17 April 2011
Excess of emotion destroys a poem. Emotion must be controlled. But I must say you have poetic genius.
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Unwritten Soul 26 July 2010
If Love is not Given...could you taste the love? it seems like u taste it deeply, and if love is not given and how could write this sweet poem? ...because u know how love is, and how did u know how love is? because love is given to always has place in pure heart, Like this poem!
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Sally Plumb Plumb 30 June 2010
If love is not given is it received?
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u are an interesting writer and its great to know your style
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Dr. V. Chakravorty 09 June 2010
Amazingly sweet poetry… spumes dousing of emotion is dulcet… mellifluous… honeyed ‘Your entire floral love décor How I’ll keep wreath If love not Given in my soul? ’… Indeed love to be kept wreathed in soul…to rejoice…it’s the body that doesn’t love we for but …readers are better learned than me to interpret this poem… 10++ Dr. V
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Flow of love continues through resiprocation.If the humand bond is bereft of love from one end, disruption occurs.Wonderful write, choice of words has a uniqueness.
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Arunesh Goswami 01 June 2010
This is the best poem of yours! Poems are an ernest yearning to reach to where we truly belong, and we can be there only when we break the bars of bondage by the fiery insane emotions of love and freedom which is verily expressed in the beautiful poem of urs. Many Thanks for sharing.10++++
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Braja K Sarkar 25 May 2010
Why fire of tune Ignite in my soul? Why lu......... ------------- Only because, you are in love! This is the only answer to all questions in this poem, I dare to tell..A lover's mind is full of questions with No proper answer! ! Nice reading...
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Sally Plumb Plumb 25 May 2010
Love is a reflection of love sometimes.
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Sandra Fowler 24 May 2010
Written with poetic zeal. Your flair for the dramatic carries the day. Excellent write. Warm regards, Sandra
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