In life
Like my poems
I miss something
In the empty space
Among the words
And in between the gap
Of two lines
As I can not delve
And becomes
A cascade of warm water
To sprinkle upon you
Nor I can go high to condense
And fall upon you
Like a drop of dew
Inappropriate become
My actions
Like the words
I use
Without proper punctuations
My intentions are
Like my emotions
Misunderstood and misinterpreted.
What is missed in the empty space is something to be filled in by the reader. Empty spaces make the poem more meaningful. Without emptiness a poem would be a monotonous single word which has no meaning. Thank you for a thought provoking poem.
We all miss something in the empty spaces otherwise we would be brilliant and that would never do. We have to keep striving to be better.
I miss something In the empty space Among the words And in between the gap great poetic lines!
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Very beautiful write....it's like comma killed a man..punctuation can do misunderstandings..Loved reading it.