Rebecca Navarre


In His Daze... - Poem by Rebecca Navarre

He's in the barn, watching the golden rays of sun
stream down. He's climbing the big, old oak tree, that
he's found. He's running off through the blades of grass.
He's thinking of, that cute, little girl who smiled at him
last. He's full of wonder, young and free. He's imagining
what there is yet to be. He's laying in the fresh cut hay.
He's down by the river, listening to what it has to say. And
as the pearly strands of rain come down. The fields become a
play ground. And in the mist and rain, of a warm summers
morn,a cool breeze blows, and new is born! There, he is, as
he stares off in that glaze. There, .. There! He is in his
Day's!

Topic(s) of this poem: father


Poet's Notes about The Poem

Papa All My Heart!

Comments about In His Daze... by Rebecca Navarre

  • Sarah ShahzadSarah Shahzad (12/23/2019 4:44:00 AM)

    i really love this, this is very nicely written..! ! (Report)Reply

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  • Rose Marie Juan-austinRose Marie Juan-austin (11/15/2019 10:21:00 PM)

    The great imagery in this write makes us go with
    the beautiful thoughts of the Poetess.
    A vivid recollection of the great things a father did in the past
    as lovingly narrated by a wonderful daughter.
    A marvelous tribute to a father. Beautifully written.
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  • Ratnakar Mandlik (11/15/2019 10:06:00 PM)

    Fabulous life song sung and enjoyed in the lap of mother nature in the midst of her equally fabulous manifestations. Congrats on well deserved poem of the day. (Report)Reply

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  • Bharati NayakBharati Nayak (11/15/2019 9:49:00 PM)

    The fields become a
    play ground. And in the mist and rain, of a warm summers
    morn, a cool breeze blows, and new is born! There, he is, as
    he stares off in that glaze. There, .. There! He is in his
    Day's! - - - - - A beautiful poem reminscing the past - - -The images are so vivid and lively.Congratulations for being selected Poet of the Day!
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  • Tom SquiresTom Squires (11/15/2019 8:47:00 PM)

    _And as the pearly strands of rain come down" what a beautiful image. Thank you for your lovely poem. (Report)Reply

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  • Savita TyagiSavita Tyagi (11/15/2019 3:54:00 PM)

    Wonderful poem of simple beauty and dreamlike narration. Congratulations! (Report)Reply

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  • Tom Allport (11/15/2019 3:23:00 PM)

    A lovely descriptive write of ones time in the sun? .....wonderfully written. (Report)Reply

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  • Bill CantrellBill Cantrell (11/15/2019 2:37:00 PM)

    Again I see this beautiful poetry before me...rightly and fittingly chosen again as poem of the day, be proud my friend! ! (Report)Reply

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  • Laurie Van Der HartLaurie Van Der Hart (11/15/2019 1:54:00 PM)

    Those were the days... Lovely poem, Rebecca. Well done for being chosen. (Report)Reply

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  • Akhtar JawadAkhtar Jawad (11/15/2019 1:02:00 PM)

    Congrats! Sometimes we see our children doing the same what we did during our childhood. (Report)Reply

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  • Kostas LagosKostas Lagos (11/15/2019 12:16:00 PM)

    Congratulations Rebecca! (Report)Reply

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  • Subhas Chandra ChakraSubhas Chandra Chakra (11/15/2019 9:45:00 AM)

    A poem clad with the fabric of great imagination and wet with the sweet and great art of writing..It's worth being chosen again and again..
    Thanks for being placed POTD..
    Regards..
    Subhas
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  • Jez BurlJez Burl (11/15/2019 8:46:00 AM)

    A vivid throw back of good old times of fatherhood..lovely images..Congratulations for a well-deserved POD.10+++ (Report)Reply

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  • C Faustino (11/15/2019 7:46:00 AM)

    Congrats for being chosen POD … a very nice and nostalgic write about your father. (Report)Reply

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  • Dr Tony BrahminDr Tony Brahmin (11/15/2019 2:44:00 AM)

    And in the mist and rain, of a warm summers
    morn, a cool breeze blows, and new is born! There, he is, as
    he stares off in that glaze. There, .. There! He is in his
    Day's! very good poem. thank u dear poetess. congrats for POD. tony
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  • Sylvia Frances ChanSylvia Frances Chan (11/15/2019 2:20:00 AM)

    WOW! What a great honour to be chosen twice as The member Poem Of The Day. Hurray!
    CONGRATULATIONS being chosen again, my dear Becca! How nice BIG surprise.
    A finest, loveliest and most wonderous poem, a TRIBUTE for your beloved PAPA in His Daze
    in his days, most thoughtful wordplay, dear. The most marvelous poem I read on this Dutch morn. A 10 Full Score, dear!
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  • Mahtab BangaleeMahtab Bangalee (11/15/2019 12:40:00 AM)

    in the mist and rain,
    of a warm summers morn,
    a cool breeze blows,
    and new is born!
    There, he is, as he stares off in that glaze/// greatly written on father
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  • Dr Dillip K SwainDr Dillip K Swain (11/15/2019 12:29:00 AM)

    He's down by the river, listening to what it has to say…….my poetic soul gets drowned in this great imaginary expression! Many congratulations for this wonderful poem being selected today as Poem of the Day! (Report)Reply

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  • Chinedu DikeChinedu Dike (8/13/2019 5:17:00 AM)

    A beautiful rendition of words from the heart. Thanks for sharing, Rebecca. (Report)Reply

    Rebecca NavarreRebecca Navarre(8/21/2019 5:25:00 PM)

    Thank you! .. Chinedu, Ever so many blessings! ..

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  • Belle WassermeisterBelle Wassermeister (8/12/2019 11:45:00 AM)

    Days, daze. A very clever play on words! I really like this. Reminds me of many summer days spent in the country years ago! (Report)Reply

    Rebecca NavarreRebecca Navarre(8/21/2019 5:24:00 PM)

    Thank you! .. Linda, God bless! ..

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Poem Submitted: Monday, September 26, 2016

Poem Edited: Saturday, November 17, 2018


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