May we always let the spirit of
Christmas flow, and the love of
our Lord, show. To our loved ones oh
so dear, and the ones we don't know.
May his passion and beauty, ring
out to and fro. May goodwill and an
everlasting warmth, be sowed. May our
hearts, glow. In hope, peace around the
world may, grow.
okay. Only one vote per reader. But PH can't stop this pleased reader--- 5+,5+.5+,5+.5+,5+.5+,5+.5+,5+.5+,5+.5+,5+.
Part 2. This beautiful hallmark of your poetry is the way you rhyme in the middle of a line which sets your verse to both sparkling and flowing like a stream. I'm going to try to give you another 5 and PH may get all red in the face if it wants! 5++++++++
This is irritating---not you, my dear, this thing of writing a well thought out comment and PH flips it into the netherfields. Anyway, I wanted to compliment you on a beautiful feature of your poetry.
This is an awesome write- elegant, smooth, reverent, and may I add a humble Amen! ! ! ! ! ! May the spirit of Christmas reign in your soul and pen forever! Top marks, my lovely friend!
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Such a lovely poem Rebecca! Thank you for sharing