In Hot Water Poem by Smoky Hoss

In Hot Water

Rating: 5.0


A tub full of water
would be better if hotter,
but the pipes are broke
and I'm just a simple bloke,
who never learned how to solder.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
John Brown 31 October 2012

Nice one Smoky. You might like mine called, Having a bath

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Valerie Dohren 30 October 2012

You'd better learn then Smoky if you want a hot bath! ! !

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Dave Walker 18 October 2012

Ha ha really made me smile, A great poem.

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Heather Wilson 18 October 2012

Oh, I don`t know, maybe it`s best you keep out of hot water Smoky, ha, ha, good one.

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