In Mind, In Pen Poem by David Darbyshire

In Mind, In Pen

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When I saw the film 'Laurence of Arabia'
I wrote a poem about the deserts.
If I saw a program over cooking,
I would write a poem about Desserts.

If I watched a program about Fishing
I'd probably write a poem over Lakes
when I saw the film ' Boa'
I wrote a poem about snakes

If I saw a T.V. show about farms
would I write a poem about a Hen?
And if I would see a documentary over 'Famine'
What would I write about then?

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Patricia Gale 27 July 2006

Inspired my things seem to accomplish the words that flow. A creation within itself.

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Scarlet Red 27 July 2006

write about food? ! care? ! love? ! that will nourish them.... nice creation david =)

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Francesca Johnson 27 July 2006

Regarding the last two lines - Swollen childrens' bellies? Misery? Sad mothers? Poverty? Dirty drinking water? Corrupt governments? This is a thought-provoking poem, Dave. Love, Fran xx

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