Hasmukh Amathalal

Gold Star - 464,818 Points (17/05/1947 / Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India)

In Mood To - Poem by Hasmukh Amathalal

I can wait no longer
She is getting stronger
Her shadow is growing
I absolutely know nothing

“I am no more with you as friend”
She almost threatened with dead end
I was puzzled and taken back
She was gone already with lots of at stake

Sometimes jealousy is at word
No amount of honesty works with words
You try more and more and she gets tough
You think whether to smile, cry or laugh

“Any reason for break off” I parried question
“No you are not worthy even to mention”
This reminded me of adamant queen
She was happy inside but angrily seen

“What can I do to please my friend”?
I tried to woe her feelings at the end
She was damn angry and threw almost everything at me
I saved head as it was only needed to be safe and free

Sometimes more love is cause of concern
You are fed up with peaceful scenes
You like to pick up some quarrel and have pleasure
Yes but see to ti that it does not turn into displeasure

I cut her link but kept cell phone open
Sometimes she may ring me once again
I waited for her call to materialize
But she is at present in no mood to oblige

Comments about In Mood To by Hasmukh Amathalal

  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (1/20/2014 2:58:00 AM)


    Rhonda :) 3 hours ago
    Very nicely said. :)
    Comment +1
    (Report) Reply

    0 person liked.
    0 person did not like.
  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (1/20/2014 2:58:00 AM)

    It's good :)

    Missjaydoubleyou Weeks3 hours ago
    I had to read it a few times to grasp it. You need to finish your sentences as it makes it difficult to read. For example any reasons for break off? and I'm no more with you as friend... please add in the missing words. Great idea though, I found the throwing things at you bit funny. If this is personal to you, give her time to calm down, don't push it, don't call her. If she loves you, she'll call when she's ready. :)
    (Report) Reply

  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (1/19/2014 4:42:00 AM)


    Lucky Omolo4 minutes ago
    (Report) Reply

  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (1/19/2014 4:31:00 AM)

    I can wait no longer
    She is getting stronger
    (Report) Reply

Read all 4 comments »

Read this poem in other languages

This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.

I would like to translate this poem »

word flags

What do you think this poem is about?

Poem Submitted: Sunday, January 19, 2014

[Report Error]