In My Dreams Poem by Susheela Alexiose

In My Dreams

Rating: 5.0


Every night in my dreams
You pay me a visit
For you know how much
I miss you during the day

You come so close to me
Talk so lovingly
The next morning I feel
So loved and cared
For you know how much
I miss those in a day

At times your presence
Gives shiver to my spine

Yet I pretend as if I love it
For I fear you'll read my heart
And stop paying me a visit

I never realized how dependent I am
On your love so precious
Till you left me to your heavenly abode
Leaving me alone in this dark world

Tuesday, October 30, 2018
Topic(s) of this poem: loneliness
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Dr Antony Theodore 03 November 2018

At times your presence Gives shiver to my spine my dream..... of love where you visited m e............ love portrayed in a great way, flowing. loving, smiling, hoping, .........at the end lonely since you are away............ all fine emotions of a human being in love you have depicted in this poem. thank u dear poetess. tony

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Kumarmani Mahakul 30 October 2018

A lover or beloved feels loneliness in dreams. It has been astutely and touchingly delineated here. This poem reflects precious love incisively. A great write.10

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Dave Walker 30 October 2018

Loneliness can be hard, but dreaming of the ones we miss Can help. Great poem.

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