Cynthia Cyanide

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In My Place - Poem by Cynthia Cyanide

The sunsets over the hills
And we sit here still together,
A gentle smile across your face
Is promising forever,

A soft breeze tickles me so
And you notice I am cold,
You hand me your warm jacket
That random act was bold,

I blush slightly hoping
You wouldn’t notice my red cheeks,
But you do and smile bigger
And oh! How that makes me weak,

It’s starting to get dark now
And we’re still sitting on this hill,
We sit closer to each other
For there is a fearful chill,

Watching the stars start to sparkle
You pull me closer to you,
I’m enjoying this night so well
I wish it wasn’t through,

The moon begins to shine
And I can still see your face,
I’m so glad I’m here
I’m so glad I’m in my place.

Comments about In My Place by Cynthia Cyanide

  • Emily Oldham (10/24/2008 11:26:00 AM)

    this is the best of all your poems so far. fantasic, keep writing! :) (Report) Reply

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  • (10/26/2007 3:46:00 PM)

    oh i really like this one sofr it miht be one of my favorite poems ive read of yours. its worded so well. ;) it also makes me a little jealous... lol (Report) Reply

  • (2/24/2007 8:12:00 PM)

    it's great ^^ i love why cant that happen to mi.*lesigh* oki i guess ill ttyl8rz^^ (Report) Reply

  • (2/24/2007 5:07:00 PM)

    cool keep up the good work (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Saturday, February 24, 2007

Poem Edited: Saturday, January 22, 2011

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