Cynthia Cyanide

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Rejected(Part One) - Poem by Cynthia Cyanide

She’s everything you’ve want
She’s your perfect little girl,
She’ll take everything you have
She’ll try to take the world,

I’m your little rebel
The one you don’t understand,
I’m the one who needs you
Would you please extend your hand,

She’s the one who’s perfect
But sneaks behind your back,
I guess she’s alittle too confident
Because she laughs at what I lack,

I’m the one who’s capable
Of anything, you know,
Yet I’m being held back
When I’m ready to run and go,

To be continued....

Comments about Rejected(Part One) by Cynthia Cyanide

  • Kyle Schaerffer (3/4/2008 12:08:00 PM)

    Very good. i can't wait til part two (Report)Reply

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  • Aurora Bell (12/17/2007 3:32:00 PM)

    I really like this poem, the sytle of it and the way it flows, good job. (Report)Reply

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  • Jona`e Levett (10/26/2007 3:42:00 PM)

    i like this. yay.. its very beautiful. (Report)Reply

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  • Gir Cupcake (2/25/2007 6:00:00 PM)

    ^^ its great! ! ! i can relate 2 it so much(u kno y) but hopefully it will turn out better 4 us 10/10^^ cant wait to read teh rest of it

    ur bestfriend,

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Poem Submitted: Sunday, February 25, 2007

Poem Edited: Sunday, January 23, 2011

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