In My Veins ♪ ♪ Poem by Maya Hershey

In My Veins ♪ ♪

Rating: 5.0


How could I have missed it all,
You left and burned away my soul,
now all that's left are pieces of my heart...
There's no more reasons to be here,
I guess there's nothing left to see,
but watching my heart get broken apart...

I feel guilty everyday,
for all the things I didn't say,
and all the love that will break away...

* * * * *
Suddenly all the memories come crashing in my brain,
and all the feelings left, they hurt over again,
cuz i miss your touch every single day,
and honey I don't care, if goodbye's the only way,
.. But baby..... our love runs in my veins...

* * * * *

How did we end up like this,
we've let go of all that there is,
it's hard to believe that love could be this hard...
My heart surrenders when you cry,
I feel that together we can fly,
so let's give our love another start...

There we were, there we stood,
you held my hand, I felt we could,
get over all our fears...

* * * * *
Suddenly all the memories come crashing in my brain,
and all the feelings left, they hurt over again,
cuz i miss your touch every single day,
and honey I don't care, if goodbye's the only way,
.. But baby..... our love runs in my veins...

* * * * *
But baby, a large part of me doesn't want you leavin',
and I'm blind to everything we see, there's no more believin'...


Now everything has pain...
And everything has shade...
Everything is not okay...

* * * * *
Suddenly all the memories come crashing in my brain,
and all the feelings left, they hurt over again,
cuz i miss your touch every single day,
and honey I don't care, if goodbye's the only way,
.. But baby..... our love runs in my veins...
our love runs in my veins,
our love runs in my veins....

(Dedicated to a very special person..... ♪ ;)

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Bright Rose 24 May 2009

Maya, you caught my attention, Im going through a tough 'end' of love and I fully understand your poem, your desscriptive language is sooooooooo brilliat, your images are vivid and you managed to capture the senses of your reader, really felt this one, awesome :) 10

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Surya . 23 June 2009

a good and sensitive poem in love and problems in early stage .the para is really revealing ' i feel that together we can fly, so let's give our love another start... 'There we were, there we stood, you held my hand, I felt we could, get over all our fears.' good write voted10 surya..

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Afzal Shauq 30 May 2009

very touchy and heart feeling poem based on some grave realities....which make readers to think of... love this poem and you are really doing sweet poems and enjoy your work..thanks for all comments you did for me and they are added to book...hope for more comments to know your expertise...10 +++++++++++++++++

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Naidz Ladia 30 May 2009

this is a very nice prose, but it could be a song..this is nice..naizz

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Noha El3wdy 30 May 2009

its really lovely, touching and sincere.

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Shashendra Amalshan 29 May 2009

A sweet musical melody indeed...nice one I enjoyed it very much..I should say one lucky special person..nice 10++

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