! ! ! ! ! In Perfect Harmony- Haiku Poem by Mamta Agarwal

! ! ! ! ! In Perfect Harmony- Haiku

Rating: 5.0


Eating corn on cob,
Sit hand in hand, in silence;
Moblile switched off.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Laurence Bourke 12 April 2009

nice and peaceful, i love a good haiku so I love this, Oh and i love corn on the cob also lol, like how you captured the peaceful feeling without many lines of text, well done! ! !

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Sathyanarayana M V S 23 April 2009

Wow! What a feeling! Nothing escapes your shrewd eyes.

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Reshma Ramesh 18 April 2009

lolzzzzzzzzzz superb

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Vidi Writes 13 April 2009

What a grand harmony clue! ! ! You give us all, a call To celebrate in silence. Thank you.

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Tsira Goge 12 April 2009

Mamta, -Tasty silence, it is good.. 10... Tsira

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Lynda Robson 12 April 2009

Sounds good to me Mamta, peace perfect peace, 10 Lynda xx

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