In Second Thoughts Poem by malini kadir

malini kadir

Nagapatinam, a coastal port, Tamilnadu, India NOW RESIDING IN TRICHY

In Second Thoughts

Rating: 2.7


In second thoughts

Can the nail from the skin be separated?
Can the air be kept pure removing oxygen?
Can the flow of rivers exist without water?
Can the bird fly at all without wings?
When you are every thing my lord
How can I stop worshiping thee
When I kneel, If I ever did kneel
It is before thee

My world would be rudderless
My thoughts haywire
you are the gravity
That keeps me on earth
How then can I exist with out thee?
You are there
In me,
Around me
In the living things around
You work my world invisible
How can I not believe in thee?
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~malinikadir

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Marieta Maglas 03 July 2009

nice metaphors: ''My world would be rudderless My thoughts haywire you are the gravity That keeps me on earth'' we need pure and practical reason at the same time...10+

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Kesav Easwaran 06 June 2009

a poem that talks free frank and sincere to the Almighty...nice presetation, Hema...thanks...10

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Ashraful Musaddeq 06 June 2009

A poem with divine aroma. The idea/message is beautiful. The way of presentation is nice,10+

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malini kadir

Nagapatinam, a coastal port, Tamilnadu, India NOW RESIDING IN TRICHY
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