In The Attic Poem by Tom Billsborough

In The Attic

Sous les combles fonces
J'aperçois rien
sauf par la petite lucarne
Un troupeau d'étoiles
Dispersant sans berger.
Moi, aussi, restant ici
Faisant défaut a ramasser mes rêves,
Mes paroles détachées
Comme ses étoiles
Dans la profondeur de mon âme.

Wednesday, August 1, 2018
Topic(s) of this poem: depression
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
TranslationIn the dark attic I notice nothing, except through the small
skylight a flock of stars with no shepherd dispersing. Me too, being here,
failing to gather my dreams, my words detached like these stars in the depths of my soul.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Bri Edwards 08 September 2018

(cont.) when i 'read' the French [a language i do NOT 'know'] i got little out of the poem except a headache (a little one) . i DID wonder if you were talking about meat, in particular a small hamburger, in which case i considered joining you in the attic, ......but people might talk. they DID when i came out of a closet once. HEH HEH. bri ;)

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Bri Edwards 08 September 2018

well, Tom, GET YOUR ACT TOGETHER! GET OUT of the attic, with its cobwebs (real and imaginary) . buy a dream catcher; i'm sure they are on Amazon! Snap out of it old chap! ! (cont.)

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tom billsborough 08 September 2018

my head feels like an old attic at the moment but if you are passing sling me up a hamburger. pal

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Annette Aitken 05 August 2018

So glad you translated this one, it was well worth the read.

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Tom Billsborough

Tom Billsborough

Preston Lancashire England
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