In The Chain Of Being Poem by Marieta Maglas

In The Chain Of Being

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Me and you
Breathing
In the chain of being,

Being recharged under the rainbow,
Burying its blue
In the blue liquid of the sea,

Which is a big mirror,
Reflecting our images backward
Left to right
(They never reverse left and right)

When our thoughts nervously break down,
(They are still alive)
Especially when they become so blue
In the salty liquid of tears;
They slowly start to become blue-green algae
In the salty liquid of the sea.

Our feelings
Are scissored by words
Until they become shreds of evidence


And our dreams
Are shackled by old chains
Of the same hate.

Our wounds still bleed
In the shell of the soul.

You choose an angle of light
Created by the moon
To slowly step
From past to present
And back again.

I see your blue uncertainties.

We drink water
From the melted ice
Of the moon

I still want to do
Something incredible
That can make me happy.
However,
I don't know any longer what exactly I want to do.
Anyway,
There's already nothing we can do
Anymore.


Baby,
It's nothing
We can do,


But we can try
To understand
Who we are,

You and me,
Chained in the same being,
Near the blue of the rainbow,


Waiting
The last sandcastle to
Irreversibly
Collapse.

Poem by marieta Maglas

Monday, February 7, 2011
Topic(s) of this poem: rainbow
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Pranab K Chakraborty 09 February 2011

Colour oriented quest. Very much powerful craft adapted to express the existential dillema. We know, nothing is here or will be anymore except some bubbles will still play within a limit of time, yet.....yes, some yets are so strong we need to eat, we need a shelter to think alone, we need some company to exchange our views.......so, when after a long quest, the poet utters...But we can try / To understand / Who we really are....the reader then get a key to stand alone beside this journey to compass his/her new station to reach. Skilled hand can create such piece of art to swim in the pond of complication of being and nothingness. Well written. Thank you. Expect more to read. Regards, pranab 10+++

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Marieta Maglas

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Radauti, Judet Suceava, Romania
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