In The Old Days Poem by nimal dunuhinga

In The Old Days

Rating: 5.0


I run fast
Faster than a tortoise.
I dive in the sea
Close to the shore.
I climb mountains
Like an ant.
Now I am old
Older than a Museum.
But I run fast
Faster than a run away horse.
I dive in the sea
Somewhere in the bottomless.
I climb the mountains
Like a Mountaineer.
Oh! This old age like a Ghost
And I know the fruitless journey is short
Yes, shorter than a dwarf.

* To my poor dearest Mom! Please send me your domicile.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Alison Cassidy 25 June 2009

Angst penned with a sigh and some clever, creaky images. I love your 'old ant' climbing the hill. Dear Nimal - the reader feels the pain of your homesickness. You communicate very well indeed. Love, Allie ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥

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Sandra Fowler 18 June 2009

Very wistful and nostalgic. Great use of metaphor and simile. Your mother represents home to you. Memorable write. 10'10. Warmest regards, Sandra

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kalubovila East, Sri Lanka
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