In The Rented Apartment - Part 2. Poem by M. Asim Nehal

In The Rented Apartment - Part 2.

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The struggle began between the two
But seeing no option and choice
They agreed to come to the terms
Let the two work in tandem pushing the body
He started to look for the resting place
The blood, the gas, the marrow, the wind
All were occupying their place securely
The tissues, the nerves and the arteries
Finally he settled in the left corner
At the middle of the place where supply
Of everything was in perfect combo
In all his sadness he hated the place
And disliked the nose, eyes, ears
Ruffling hairs growing everywhere
Like the weeds in a Greenfield
Either, he did not liked the hands, the legs
As they took him to those places
He did not like or enjoy
The only solace which he got was
This was the rented place and his stay was temporary

Monday, January 9, 2017
Topic(s) of this poem: philosophical
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Deepak S S 27 December 2018

Philosophical. You described heart perfectly. Body and Soul is the theme.

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Edward Kofi Louis 14 January 2017

In a Greenfield. Nice work.

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Akhtar Jawad 09 January 2017

A wonderful metaphor, I think it's grave that has been described.

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