In The Rented Apartment - Part 1 Poem by M. Asim Nehal

In The Rented Apartment - Part 1

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He was asked to enter a rented apartment
The locality, surrounding and entrance
All were fabulous and enticing
But as he entered it,
The doors were closed
And he felt suffocated,
There were no lights either
It appeared a dark tunnel
A prison and limiting bound
He shouted and then cried
But there was nobody to hear
What he saw from outside was totally different
Then he received a breath of fresh air
And flow of fresh blood and some milk
He tried to escape the place
He ran from one corner to another
And realized it was one way entry only
There was no escape route from it
He disliked the place and started hating it
He was wondering how this trap was laid
And his freedom is gone for the time being
He struggled to come out and enjoy
But, no use, all doors were locked
And brain was set over him to control

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Deepak S S 27 December 2018

A philosophical write, I liked it.

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Akhtar Jawad 09 January 2017

A meaningful metamorphic poem, to understand it better I am going to read part.

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Edward Kofi Louis 04 January 2017

Fabulous and enticing! ! Nice piece of work.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 02 January 2017

Entry is realized to set control over. This is an amazingly versed story poem. This is mesmerized with flow of words.10

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