In Thy Heart Poem by MELVIN BANGGOLLAY

In Thy Heart

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IN THY HEART
Melvin Banggollay


In thy heart, you behold heaven
Full of shining stars that enlighten
your burden when you're broken
As steam of tender love be given
to heal all the pains you've driven
and shower you joy that enliven.

Behold, in thy heart, you'll not cry
nor touch any sorrow as we try
to nestle a love with golden pie
of burning passion that can defy
gentle touch of others who will try
To take my love to make you cry.

Thy gentle heart only beats for thee
that even till eternity will always be
smiling, shining, breathing to see
the grace of your love with melody
and everlasting charm only for thee
That I felt when you smiled at me.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Abha Sharma 24 April 2008

beautiful coherent stanzas...soft romance touched by smooth flow of words....laced with stunning imagery...well expressed.

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Fine work here....Creative employment of straight-suited rhyming of each stanza....Smooth flux, throughout...Solid Work... ~ FjR ~ ..2008..

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MELVIN BANGGOLLAY

MELVIN BANGGOLLAY

Natonin, Mountain Province, Philippines
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