In Uncertain Sea Poem by Jessel Jane Tevar Toring

In Uncertain Sea

Rating: 5.0


As the waves danced through,
I think of my love for you...
swaying, wavering.

POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
my first haiku.. written while travelling home by ship.
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9Sep2012
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Jessel Jane Tevar Toring 10 September 2012

thank you for the comments.. it just occurred to me how love can be wavering as the waves of the sea... completely uncertain.. looking forward to read new poems from you.. tc

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Pranab K Chakraborty 10 September 2012

Fantastic. Only love is certain harbor to anchor. Excellent SUTRA of living. Thanks for sharing...............................Pranab k c 10

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Manleh Castillo 10 September 2012

...expressive one...enjoy writing haiku.. :)

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