In Valentine's Day Poem by Marvin Tordillos

In Valentine's Day

Rating: 5.0


First day of school they've kick my ass,
My evil classmates bully me in class,
Mark, Jason and Jaime totally sucks,
Those good for nothing fellows as bad as their socks.

Then came a day, a transferee came,
That took the glory of the 3 idiots fame,
And most of all, she's a lovely lass,
The first one in history to silence our class.

Then came the amazement and shock to me,
When she came and asked me if she could sit with me,
I stammered and stuttered as I said yes,
Those eyes were an angel's, and the face we're a princess's.

Day after day, as time passes by,
She became my idol, my crush in Science,
She's a master of bonding and chemical fusion,
I wonder if we too could be a perfect combination.

Night after night I look at the sky,
Imagining and waiting for a shooting star to fly,
So I could wish upon a star, that she'll forever be mine,
For she's the only one I see when I close and open my eyes

But those 3 idiots are up to something,
They're trying to get first the one I'm desiring,
So before they do, I've decided something,
I'm going to challenge myself and dare to be daring.

On Valentine's day, there was a contest,
It says: 'A Poem of Love for one of your dearest: ',
And there she was in front like Annabeth Chase,
Looking marvelous and beautiful in her silver necklace.

The cloak of courage and confidence I wear,
Of what the others will say, the hell I care,
As long as I've done my part, my love to share,
I will not have doubts or sorrow nor will I despair.

With heart screaming full of ardent desire
I said this poem as though I'm ablaze on fire,
I speak with love and look her straight in the eye,
I wonder if I'm just hallucinating, but did I see her smile?

'I may not be your ideal guy,
But I'll make sure you'll never cry,
In my arms baby, you'll always smile,
For I'll make sure I will never hurt you 'till the day I die.'

As I finish speaking, she's already walking and the crowds are cheering,
'I love you too Marvz, I always have from the very beginning…'
She hugged and kissed me, it was utterly amazing,
She's mine and nothing else matters then, in the land of the living.

Monday, February 19, 2018
Topic(s) of this poem: love and dreams
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Naila Rais 10 September 2018

A wonderful poetry...... Keep it up....10++++++++...loved reading it.... You may like to read my poem Fragrance of my love too..... Naila

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Bipasha D 19 February 2018

A sweet love poem flows really well. Really enjoyable. Rated 10

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Cheryl Tutaan 19 February 2018

Wow! kaka kilig po! :) The first stanza really made me laugh, mga pinoy talaga :) I love the character being portrayed, very catchy, full of humor and truly a heartfelt...The rhythm and rhyming of words are perfect! I enjoyed reading your piece, Marvin...I rate it 10+++++++ You would also visit my My First Love thank you... Cheryl♡

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Brgy. Kalinawan, Jaro, Leyte, Phillipines
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