A Little Bit Poem by Marvin Tordillos

A Little Bit

Rating: 4.8


I'm a little bit funny, a little bit mad,
a little bit happy, a little bit sad,
a little bit holy, a little bit bad,
I'm a little man Tordy, a little bit odd.

I do admit my clothes are a little bit messy,
I do a lot of work, a little bit lazy,
I do listen to my teacher, a little bit drowsy,
But I do always went to school, a little bit early.

I always speak of things, a little bit dreamy,
I always speak to people, a little bit frankly,
I always approach people, a little bit friendly,
I always like simple people, a little bit geeky.

I have a lot of reactions, I'm a little bit touchy,
I have a lot of enemies, a little bit deadly,
I have a lot of friends, a little bit hearty,
I have a lot of attitudes, a little bit saintly.

I broke my heart a thousand times, a little bit badly,
I found myself a million times, a little bit lonely,
God comfort me a billion times, a little bit lavishly,
I'll forever be thankful to God a zillion times, for giving me a wonderful family.

POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
An introduction to myself
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Chinedu Dike 28 May 2019

Well articulated and elegantly embellished with poetic rhyme and rhythm. A beautiful work of art written with conviction. Thanks for sharing, Marvin.

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Walterrean Salley 15 February 2018

I'll forever be thankful to a zillion times, for giving me a wonderful family. _______________________________________________________ Family. They're there through all our quirkiness. Wonderful.

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Marvin Tordillos 19 February 2018

thanks, for the comment, I was thinking that in all the things I've gone through without their encouragement and support I could never make it through anything I've faced so far.

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Jazib Kamalvi 08 November 2017

A refined poetic imagination, Marvin. You may like to read my poem, Love And Lust. Thank you.

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Marvin Tordillos 19 February 2018

sure I will Jazib Kamalvi :) thanks for reading my poem, it's an honor :)

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Dr Antony Theodore 22 March 2016

I broke my heart a thousand times, a little bit badly, I found myself a million times, a little bit lonely, God comfort me a billion times, a little bit lavishly, I'll forever be thankful to God a zillion times, for giving me a wonderful family. Smiled after reading your little poem... soooooooooooo nice. wonderful imagination and very well depicted. like your poem very much. tony

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Marvin Tordillos 19 February 2018

thank you so much Dr. Tony Brahmin :) , it's always a pleasure, I've been posting my poems on a different site, but will post them here, my reply is a bit late, but thank you, I'm glad it made you smile :)

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