Neela Nath Das

In Your Absence - Poem by Neela Nath Das

I loved you as a dew-drop,
loves buds to help,
Them to bloom, a bird
loves the sky, the grass-hopper,
wishes to be one with,
nature being green like her.......
I wanted to be the morning
breeze to sway the branches,
Of the trees, the heads
of grasses, or to run along,
The meadows merrily!
Nature doesn't dance,
with the tune of lust!
So, do I! The music of
heart, the storm of
the screaming souls,
mesmerize me with the
same attraction!
In your absence in
my heart, I feel like
a withered leaf, a blank
sheet where we could write,
a poem together with the
touch of our heavenly
In your absence, I see
the cruel eyes of an
evil spirit who wishes
to toss me in the air
to turn me into nothingness.
In your absence, I can't
be one with my mother
Nature, in your........

Comments about In Your Absence by Neela Nath Das

  • Unwritten Soul (8/23/2012 4:31:00 AM)

    This is a screen of feeling where we may see what we felt and we feel what we have seen..lke it :) _Unwritten Soul (Report) Reply

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  • Valerie Dohren (8/17/2012 1:00:00 PM)

    A beautiful write Nil, very inspired and lovely. (Report) Reply

  • Kelly Seale (8/17/2012 6:26:00 AM)

    ...Absence. Yes! My lips said the word in a hushed whisper, trailing when you ended. What a marvelous effect. I must try this, yes, if you don't mind me borrowing the effect. Great Write Nilakshi... Great Write! Love It!
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  • Robert Wynn (8/14/2012 12:13:00 AM)

    That's really cool, magical write, please sign the guest book on my new web site Thanks Nilakshi. (Report) Reply

  • Kasia Fedyk (8/12/2012 11:55:00 AM)

    Amazing and so incredibly beautiful Nila sometimes I have no words to describe the feeling but in silence heart flies and reaches its destination to tell. Love you, Kasi (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Sunday, August 12, 2012

Poem Edited: Monday, August 13, 2012

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