Incinerate Ultimate Melancholy Poem by Terence George Craddock

Incinerate Ultimate Melancholy

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make an end
to all thoughts
negative
to all thoughts
dark lost void
hopeless

make an end
to timeless
struggles
make an end
to life traps
depressions

let all thoughts
seeding possible
eventual failures
be caught cast
out soul cleansed
liberate mind

transformation embraces
failures struggles attempts
life growth growing pains
develop birth mind muscles
seed resilience elasticity heart
incinerate melancholy choices

Wednesday, September 2, 2020
Topic(s) of this poem: depression
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
Copyright © Terence George Craddock
Written in September 2020 on the 3.9.2020.
The contrast poem completing the theme of the poems 'Always Life Renewal Seeks' and 'Nature Seeds Transformation' by the poet Terence George Craddock.
Inspired by a poem theme not written out on in December 2010 on the 6.12.2010.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Varsha M 12 February 2021

This is beautiful one sir. Pulling from negativity to positivity is much appreciable

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Deluke Muwanigwa 02 September 2020

Great one. Again would humbly suggest starting all verses with " make and end" as you did V1 and V2

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